@NellyOnly: so my destiny is already traced :'(
I have to be strong and endure, it may be years later that i will retrieve freedom. But for now i have to bow and be sure to not look into the monstruosity awaiting me...
It approaches, i sense it... my sens are overwhelm by it's presence, it's foul and dark aura... The non entity from the abysse is approching me...
I must hide !
I cannot let it take me !
I will hide, fight, flee, or doing whatever i need to live !
And if i must use as a last resort some old invocation to summon Cthulhu, I WILL DO IT !!! I will not bow, i cannot !
YOUR DEERLY DEER IS A DERANGED DRAUGR !!!!
I WILL NOT LET MYSELF BE SEIZE !
I'm slowly reading through this story and you're probably going to hate me for nitpicking, but! "-too far gone." versus "to" and "-well paying-" versus "payed". So far, the story has been interesting (but I'm far too busy to read it as often as I'd like). Keep it up!