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she sound soooooo happy when she said: "then we got here" xD

posted by Pyrophoricity on March 3rd, 2014, 1:10 pm





 
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@Pyrophoricity: Well, whadd'ya expect?
She had to leave her reindeer far behind, and you know how BEAUTIFUL it is <3

posted by NellyOnly on March 3rd, 2014, 1:41 pm





 
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@NellyOnly: nooooo the reindeer of the apocalupse from the darkness !
Why did you remind me that thing !

xD

I can hear it whispering in my ears : ... kiiill meeee

posted by Pyrophoricity on March 3rd, 2014, 1:58 pm





 
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@Pyrophoricity: It loves you deerly and wants you, marry it, I promise I'll draw your weddingpicture <3

posted by NellyOnly on March 3rd, 2014, 2:27 pm





 
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@NellyOnly: please no ! Ah, The nightmare ! My mind ! I feel my mind destroying itself from the inside !
KRAKEN COME HELP ME !

ps: "deerly" xD

posted by Pyrophoricity on March 3rd, 2014, 2:49 pm





 
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@Pyrophoricity: KRAKEN WILL NOT HELP YOU UNLESS YOU MARRY MY DEER DEER.

(and yes, deerly 8D)

posted by NellyOnly on March 4th, 2014, 9:31 am





 
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@NellyOnly: so my destiny is already traced :'(
I have to be strong and endure, it may be years later that i will retrieve freedom. But for now i have to bow and be sure to not look into the monstruosity awaiting me...
It approaches, i sense it... my sens are overwhelm by it's presence, it's foul and dark aura... The non entity from the abysse is approching me...
I must hide !
I cannot let it take me !
I will hide, fight, flee, or doing whatever i need to live !
And if i must use as a last resort some old invocation to summon Cthulhu, I WILL DO IT !!! I will not bow, i cannot !
YOUR DEERLY DEER IS A DERANGED DRAUGR !!!!
I WILL NOT LET MYSELF BE SEIZE !

posted by Pyrophoricity on March 4th, 2014, 2:13 pm





 
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@Pyrophoricity: Ahahaa, that last comment nearly made me pee xDDD
BUT IT WILL HAUNT YOU AND IT WILL MAKE YOU ITS DEERLY BELOVED WAIFU <3

posted by NellyOnly on March 5th, 2014, 9:22 am





 
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@NellyOnly: noooooooooooooooooooo i'll cooooomee baaaaaaaaaaaack

posted by Pyrophoricity on March 5th, 2014, 1:58 pm





 
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I'm slowly reading through this story and you're probably going to hate me for nitpicking, but! "-too far gone." versus "to" and "-well paying-" versus "payed". So far, the story has been interesting (but I'm far too busy to read it as often as I'd like). Keep it up!

posted by Anselme on October 16th, 2017, 10:42 pm





 
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@Anselme: Hahha, that's perfectly fine with me!
English is my second language, so I'm happy people point out grammatical errors to me! :D<3
And thank you! <3

posted by NellyOnly on October 17th, 2017, 8:38 am





 
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@NellyOnly: I'm also ESL! So my suggestions may still be wrong, but should make better sense now! I'll be sure to bring up other words if I see them, then! :)

posted by Anselme on October 17th, 2017, 7:15 pm





 
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@Anselme: Please do!<3
I want to improve, so anything that'll help is much appreciated <3

posted by NellyOnly on October 17th, 2017, 10:13 pm



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